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Jul 28

Written by: etcav
7/28/2010 7:00 AM

Life, at times, should post a sign

Warning: Dangerous Riptide Ahead

On the surface, the seas appear calm

But in the murky water, we must be able to tread

 

The rip current is so easily disguised

We often do not see the harm until it is too late

Then, we are left struggling to stay afloat

Trying to avoid a disastrous fate

 

But a riptide can be conquered

We can break free from its iron grasp

If we ride out the current without a sense of panic

The danger will fade and eventually pass

 

It is when we struggle against the tide

That we lose our stamina and then the fight

When we give up control; we gain control

We can wade through the darkness and into the light

 

We all have to take on our own riptides

Powerful forces that drown us in desperation

When we fight smart, we can beat the enemy

We win the battle with patience and determination

Donna Cavanagh-MyVeryOwnFan.com

 

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3 comments so far...

Re: The Riptide

Another lovely poem and great message. Thank you Donna. Pat

By Patricia D'Arcy on   7/28/2010 8:58 AM

Re: The Riptide

Another great one. Thanks!!! You rock!
I am going to take this advice for sure.

By Christine Lockwood on   7/29/2010 4:13 PM

Re: The Riptide

Forwarding this to someone who is fighting a huge Riptide! Well said, Donna.

By Lisa on   7/30/2010 7:03 AM

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