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Jul 22

Written by: etcav
7/22/2010 7:27 AM

Two women in a diner spoke about their pain

Each was sure that her aches were worse

Their tales of suffering, they could not wait to tell

About their multitude of diseases, they loved to converse

 

One woman told the other as she took a mouthful of pie

That her suffering was more than all the rest

After yelling at the waiter, the other retorted that she was more ill

And she said her pain could put all other pain to the test

 

They were involved in this competition of woe

The more pitiful life would get the top prize

Complaining and moaning was the sure road to success

Unfortunately, the real winner is the one who eventually dies

 

Before you enter the competition of woe

Take stock of your life and the good it contains

There must be something that gets you breathing in the morning

It cannot be just about new ways to complain

 

I had to wonder if these women ever laugh

Had they lost their capacity to attempt a smile?

I was there for an hour, and I had to think

Was it only the complaining that made their life worthwhile?

 

So, to the two ladies in the diner, I say thank you

For I came there to be alone and in self-pity to wallow

But your bitterness showed me a horrible glimpse into the future

And I’ll be damned if your path is one I choose to follow

 

Yes, there will be aches and pains

There will be times of loneliness and despair

But I will not succumb to the competition of woe

It will be the good in my life that I will long to share

 

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Re: The Competition of Woe

I know somebody like the women in your poem. Whenever you see her and say "Hi how are you?" her answer is always "Don't ask!!" so I don't ha ha However, she proceeds to tell of the terrible time she has had since we last saw each other. It has got to the stage where I dread seeing her and I think this is how it is with all people that do nothing but complain - people really don't want to hear other peoples trivial problems (and usually with these people they are just trivial). One of this woman's complaints was - wait for it - there were too many children on the Cruise she was on!!!!! Anyway Donna a really great poem - as always. Pat

By Patricia D'Arcy on   7/22/2010 1:54 PM

Re: The Competition of Woe

This is not me no matter what anyone says!!! I think other people like to complain about what complaining I do do.People need to realize that no one cares to hear any of your problems, I realize that. Anyway, this shoe doesn't fit so I am not going to wear it.

By Christine Lockwood on   7/24/2010 12:15 AM

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